I remember that one time I got caught red-handed, and I would like to tell you how that happend. It was very embarrassing and I felt really bad. This feeling made me understand the consequences of my actions.
My parents went to a freinds's(sp.- friend's) wedding and they said they were come(gr.-coming) back at around 00:30, and they asked me to not(wo.-not to) invite any freinds. Of course I said ok. But I really wanted to invite friends that night becasue I had an empty house without parents and brothers,(Start a new sentence) so I invited a few freinds. and then of course, my parents came home early.
They saw me and my freinds playing poker with pizza in our mouths, and the house was very messy. My parents' faces looked sad and angry, while all my freinds left the house one by one and apologized to my parents. I felt so bad at that moment and I could really feel my parents' disappointment. I got a big punishment after that occasion.
To conclude, getting caught red-handed by your parents is the worse feeling that you can have. and(מיותר) (It is) only because of that feeling (That) I know I will never do this again. I recommend to anyone who read(gr.-reads) this, do not disobey your parents and get caught, it's the worse feeling ever.
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(85)
Daphna
My parents went to a freinds's(sp.- friend's) wedding and they said they were come(gr.-coming) back at around 00:30, and they asked me to not(wo.-not to) invite any freinds. Of course I said ok. But I really wanted to invite friends that night becasue I had an empty house without parents and brothers,(Start a new sentence) so I invited a few freinds. and then of course, my parents came home early.
They saw me and my freinds playing poker with pizza in our mouths, and the house was very messy. My parents' faces looked sad and angry, while all my freinds left the house one by one and apologized to my parents. I felt so bad at that moment and I could really feel my parents' disappointment. I got a big punishment after that occasion.
To conclude, getting caught red-handed by your parents is the worse feeling that you can have. and(מיותר) (It is) only because of that feeling (That) I know I will never do this again. I recommend to anyone who read(gr.-reads) this, do not disobey your parents and get caught, it's the worse feeling ever.
This is much better. Good work.
(85)
Daphna
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