Red-Handed

I remember that one time I got caught red-handed, and I would like to tell you how that happend. It was very embarrassing and I felt really bad. This feeling made me understand the consequences of my actions.

My parents went to a freinds's(sp.- friend's) wedding and they said they were come(gr.-coming) back at around 00:30, and they asked me to not(wo.-not to) invite any freinds. Of course I said ok. But I really wanted to invite friends that night becasue I had an empty house without parents and brothers,(Start a new sentence) so I invited a few freinds. and then of course, my parents came home early.

They saw me and my freinds playing poker with pizza in our mouths, and the house was very messy. My parents' faces looked sad and angry, while all my freinds left the house one by one and apologized to my parents. I felt so bad at that moment and I could really feel my parents' disappointment. I got a big punishment after that occasion.

To conclude, getting caught red-handed by your parents is the worse feeling that you can have. and(מיותר) (It is) only because of that feeling (That) I know I will never do this again. I recommend to anyone who read(gr.-reads) this, do not disobey your parents and get caught, it's the worse feeling ever.


This is much better. Good work.
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Daphna

A letter to the Editor

27 Haportzim st.

holon

september 7, 2013

(The Editor)

"Aaretz" newspaper
Jerusalem

To the Editor,

Yesterday I was reading your article at(ww.) the newspaper about the meitzav tests and the explanations about their cancellation, and i have to say, as a student at(ww.) high school, that i totally agree with the explanations you gave in your article, and the meitzav tests should have been suspended long ago.

I don't know how the meitzav tests work in other schools, but in my school the meitzav tests serve a diffrent cause(ww.-purpose) that(ww) the meitzav was made for. The school use(gr.) the tests to show that it is the most successfull school around, and that most of the students should learn at(ww.) that school.

Second, the teachers wasted a lot of time to teach(gr.) the students harder only to achieve a good grade on the meitzav exam, only for the intrest of the school to look better. That made the learning at(ww.) meitzav time a lot harder and (more) exhausting.

To conclude, the meizav tests are suppose(d)  to serve a cause(ww.) and the schools are turning it into a competition between them. I am glad you published your article in the newspaper so everybody can understand how unnecessary the tests was(gr.) for the students.


Sincerely yours.
Ben Stark.
Much better. Well done.
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Daphna