Chris' diary: Coming back from the war.
Dear diary,
I survived the biggest war that the world has known so far, and I am finally back home. Actually, I am the only one who made it. All my brothers from my squad are dead or missing, and I am the only one who got to live after the bloodbath. I feel that I have to be better now, and succeed in everything I do.
When I saw mother and father again, I cried like a little girl. I didn't see them for the last 3 years, and they didn't changed(gr.-change) at all. Father is still runing(gr.-running) the business and he will probably ask me to join him when I look for a job. And mother, well..... I didn't even gets(gr.-get) home and she is(gr.+ww.- started) telling me that I need(gr.-needed) to get a wife and a solid job. I think she really needs to change her view on the world. I mean, life is more then getting a wife and a job. People were dying like flies in the war so people like my mother will(gr.-would) live. And then(מיותר) she talks with(ww.-to) me about getting a job.
I keep thinking about Ann. I wonder how she is getting along with Larry's death. She must be so sad and miserable. Mabye I shuold(sp.-should) send (her) a letter to her(מיותר), and see how she feels. Who knows, mabye(sp.-maybe) I can make her feel better.
Well, there is much more I would like to talk about, but I think that's enough for one day. I just came back and I (am) very tired. Until next time.
(Chris)
Good work. This is better but you still have quite a few grammar mistakes.
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Daphna
